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Array ( [sid] => 162858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant give up [time] => 2010-10-21 22:33:48 [hometext] => i was never a poet until myheart was broken i write these when i drive it gives me the best ideas [bodytext] => your allready gone now
your moving on
im lost in the past
i dont think i can last
my heart is broken
for you were my token
my silence was bliss
for that time was a miss
just long for that kiss
that kept me going through all of this
why cant you see
why cant you be the girl i use to see
who stared at me with melting eyes
for the love we still share shall allways be forever [comments] => 6 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 24 [informant] => jcline5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

cant give up

Contributed by jcline5 on Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 10:33:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

your allready gone now
your moving on
im lost in the past
i dont think i can last
my heart is broken
for you were my token
my silence was bliss
for that time was a miss
just long for that kiss
that kept me going through all of this
why cant you see
why cant you be the girl i use to see
who stared at me with melting eyes
for the love we still share shall allways be forever

Copyright © jcline5 ... [ 2010-10-21 22:33:48]
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Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 02:29:12 AM AEST
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i know how you feel

Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by LandsleyAlexandre on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 08:09:28 AM AEST
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Cool

Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 01:49:04 PM AEST
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I've heard it said that the best poems come from emotional scars, you have to go through the trials of life to begin to heal.
Poetry, getting your thoughts written down is how some deal with those trials.
Feelings are never a bad thing, so keep on writing.

Steve

Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 02:24:10 PM AEST
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As Steve said, poetry is an expression. Good start. Continue in your writings.

Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
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There was obviously a lot of feeling in this. Writing is where you should take your emotion.
Good job

Re: cant give up (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:15:49 AM AEST
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Nice job really like the poem you do have a gift always use that.

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