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I Will Set You Free.....
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 11:40:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want every beat of my heart under your name
To keep my soul alive for loving you
I want my soul to float under your name
To keep my body alive for loving you
I want my body to live under your name
To breathe each breath for loving you
I want each breath taken under your name
To keep on loving you forever and ever
I will love you forever till the last breath of my life
I will love you until your last vision will be gone
from when I will be closing my eyes with my last breath
That is the time when I will set you free to go out of my life
Copyright ©
Anbarean
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2010-10-21 11:40:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by LandsleyAlexandre on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 06:07:31 PM AEST (User
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cool poem |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 08:59:08 PM AEST (User
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whoa... pretty deep feelings there.
brief but powerful poem at the same time.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 05:35:32 AM AEST (User
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ahhhhh xx |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 01:27:48 PM AEST (User
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Very intense emotion brings each line alive.
There is no doubt of the strength of the loeve you feel in this.
May that intensity always burn strong like the warmth of the sun.
Steve |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by kerissasmith on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 01:07:37 AM AEST (User
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love it!
good job!! =] |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 07:39:45 AM AEST (User
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great job keep up the fantastic writing |
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Re: I Will Set You Free.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 05:45:35 AM AEST (User
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I Will Set You Free like the poem keep using that gift you have from God I know you will. |
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