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Array ( [sid] => 162811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Finding the root of it all [time] => 2010-10-18 16:18:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A baby step into the deserted planes
guided by childlike curiousity
exploring the world in the high grains
smiles are dominant as he is free
but trembling noices come
carving its way into all
it lashes with pain and he is bound to succumb
as he bends over to his mothers call

What happended he doesnt know
dad just left so very long ago

Darkness rises in all he does
he seeks care with just cause
but finds resentment in his vicinity
will this continue for infinity?
he asks himself in the mist
but is of course blinded here
he leads himself astray to exist
to sustain the pain and not disappear.

And it all goes back to his beginning
to the crater left by a childhood sting [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 75 [informant] => zeberdee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Finding the root of it all

Contributed by zeberdee on Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 04:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

A baby step into the deserted planes
guided by childlike curiousity
exploring the world in the high grains
smiles are dominant as he is free
but trembling noices come
carving its way into all
it lashes with pain and he is bound to succumb
as he bends over to his mothers call

What happended he doesnt know
dad just left so very long ago

Darkness rises in all he does
he seeks care with just cause
but finds resentment in his vicinity
will this continue for infinity?
he asks himself in the mist
but is of course blinded here
he leads himself astray to exist
to sustain the pain and not disappear.

And it all goes back to his beginning
to the crater left by a childhood sting

Copyright © zeberdee ... [ 2010-10-18 16:18:37]
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Re: Finding the root of it all (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 10:11:33 PM AEST
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Wow. This entire piece is well written. The writing and the way it all comes together makes for great reading. From the start i found it gripping and full of hurt. Well done.

duff

Re: Finding the root of it all (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 07:46:42 AM AEST
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Wow finding the root to it all loved the way you used the words the poem came alive God has given you a gift always use that I know you will.

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