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Array ( [sid] => 162763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DRYING TEARS [time] => 2010-10-14 08:58:00 [hometext] => IT EXPRESSES MY INNER FEELINGS AND PAIN I WENT THROUGH IN THIS LIFE WITH NO ONE TO HELP [bodytext] => Wiped so many tears these past years
Cried out loud but nobody cared
Struggled to free myself & it all failed
Felt so much pain with no-one to share
Life' obstacles is wat i faced
I sat down & watched all my frends fade
lonely and deserted i laid
Peacefully lyk a lamb
my brain was juss full of haze
Oh! wat a shame
It must be difficult to be a male
Days paced
And the time i chased
But in an instant life turned into a maze
Anxious of 2moro my bones shaked
Damn! i thought to myself
Is my life this cursed
Wondering how i passed that phase?
Coz in my heart hope is wat i placed
& in the end victroy is wat i aced
Don't worrry this is a tale
From my mind it juss came
I juss hope its not lame. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 39 [informant] => SLAMMER [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

DRYING TEARS

Contributed by SLAMMER on Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 08:58:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Wiped so many tears these past years
Cried out loud but nobody cared
Struggled to free myself & it all failed
Felt so much pain with no-one to share
Life' obstacles is wat i faced
I sat down & watched all my frends fade
lonely and deserted i laid
Peacefully lyk a lamb
my brain was juss full of haze
Oh! wat a shame
It must be difficult to be a male
Days paced
And the time i chased
But in an instant life turned into a maze
Anxious of 2moro my bones shaked
Damn! i thought to myself
Is my life this cursed
Wondering how i passed that phase?
Coz in my heart hope is wat i placed
& in the end victroy is wat i aced
Don't worrry this is a tale
From my mind it juss came
I juss hope its not lame.

Copyright © SLAMMER ... [ 2010-10-14 08:58:00]
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Re: DRYING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 12:54:57 PM AEST
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Nice write but spelling so bad it takes away the feel of the poem.
Sorry, Chris.

Re: DRYING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 01:39:33 PM AEST
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awh :( good poem hpe life gets better

Re: DRYING TEARS (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 06:30:56 AM AEST
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A nice honest poem did you here write
I think you put a pretty good fight

Keep up the nice writing.

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