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Array ( [sid] => 162754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up [time] => 2010-10-12 18:44:11 [hometext] => Sad but true. [bodytext] => don't sell yourself short, she said
but who would want to buy me
wrapped in blankets of medication
i hope they never find me
It's always a battle between the liars
and the tryers, but their hearts are in the right place
so now i'm drowning in a rack of beer
all i see is her face

don't listen to a word that they say
all your friends are lieing
doesn't matter how long you've known them
doesn't matter if you're trying
so let's demonstrate this ***** mess
in a easy to view display
everything you've ever loved
is dieing every day.

SHE WAS THE ONE
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK
WHAT'S DONE IS DONE
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK
SHE IS THE ONE
YOU KNOW THAT FOR A FACT
BUT WHAT'S DONE IS DONE
AND SHE WILL NEVER COME
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK

so put away your books and studies
you're wasting all your time
love is something you can't just learn
you have to wait in line
and get denied and get ripped apart
you'll never learn until you break you heart
love just hurts, don't ever start
it will never last
it will never last

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It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up

Contributed by pat346 on Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 06:44:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

don't sell yourself short, she said
but who would want to buy me
wrapped in blankets of medication
i hope they never find me
It's always a battle between the liars
and the tryers, but their hearts are in the right place
so now i'm drowning in a rack of beer
all i see is her face

don't listen to a word that they say
all your friends are lieing
doesn't matter how long you've known them
doesn't matter if you're trying
so let's demonstrate this ***** mess
in a easy to view display
everything you've ever loved
is dieing every day.

SHE WAS THE ONE
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK
WHAT'S DONE IS DONE
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK
SHE IS THE ONE
YOU KNOW THAT FOR A FACT
BUT WHAT'S DONE IS DONE
AND SHE WILL NEVER COME
SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK

so put away your books and studies
you're wasting all your time
love is something you can't just learn
you have to wait in line
and get denied and get ripped apart
you'll never learn until you break you heart
love just hurts, don't ever start
it will never last
it will never last

Copyright Â© pat346 ... [ 2010-10-12 18:44:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by Violet_Fae on Wednesday, 13th October 2010 @ 11:55:29 AM AEST
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I can relate to this, with it happening to me recently. It really struck a chord, very emotional :)

Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Wednesday, 13th October 2010 @ 04:12:42 PM AEST
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Connected with this. Love is a necessary risk.

Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 05:35:44 AM AEST
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Good write and you can feel the pain and struggle in the
words you wrote. So many struggle with love but if it
doesn’t make you happy then chances are its not love and
if they don’t love you back then its not love. Life is a
challenge that’s for sure and I wish I had it figured out but
I’m more lost then I’ve ever been. Thanks for your words
and keep up the writes and remember only you can be
happy with you no one else can get you there but yourself.

~Steve~

Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 11:54:51 PM AEST
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wow... so brutally blunt, yet this is the kind of thing most (brokenhearted) people know and feel deep down.

But honestly, bitterness won't bring about a better chance for love in the future.

Anyways, I like this poem. Plus there's some parts that I can relate to at the moment.

Thanx for writing this

take care

-K.Z.

Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 09:44:34 PM AEST
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Plain and simple love hurts
well done.

Re: It's better to have loved and....may I interrupt you, shut up (User Rating: 1 )
by girlbballjunky101 on Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 07:14:39 AM AEST
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love hurts so sad to say.
but that poems was good just to say

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