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Dirt
Contributed by
Broken921
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Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 02:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel like a piece of dirt to be walked on ,
spit on and with no control moved in all directions,
just a spec one millions,
this is what dirt would feel like if dirty had feelings !!!
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Broken921
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2010-10-11 14:52:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dirt
(User Rating: 1 ) by potentialpoet96 on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 05:50:14 PM AEST (User
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i love it.
i thought it was very .. deep. |
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Re: Dirt
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST (User
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much thought into so few lines... |
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