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'TIL THE DAY IT WAS GONE

Contributed by chrisdavid on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 11:36:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



We met at the train station
And instantly we knew
Because there was no hesitation
Back then we danced to our favourite song
We didn't know what we had
'til the day it was gone

Our love went undiminished
But as each day went by
Slowly we were finished
I guess time is what drifted us apart
But we'll always be together
In my heart

All the time that we spent
Laughing for what seemed forever
All the vows that we made
About leaving each other, never
We can only look back
At how it all went wrong
We didn't know what we had
'til the day it was gone




Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-10-11 11:36:19]
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Re: 'TIL THE DAY IT WAS GONE (User Rating: 1 )
by potentialpoet96 on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 02:38:21 PM AEST
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this is deep, i love it.


Re: 'TIL THE DAY IT WAS GONE (User Rating: 1 )
by Violet_Fae on Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 04:58:16 AM AEST
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An affectionate piece.


Re: 'TIL THE DAY IT WAS GONE (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 10:38:54 PM AEST
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Oh MY GOD I love it!




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