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Words from a healing heart
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 10:43:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I took that chance,
And we spent some time,
I knew it was wrong,
I heard the clock chime,
It brought me to reality,
How stupid I had been,
I didn't want to see you,
But you were just so keen,
The way you looked at me,
Made me feel quite sick,
I remember you breaking me down,
Like flames on a candle wick,
You tried to feed me your lies,
These lies I refused to swallow,
You thought I'd let you in,
But inside I'm pretty hollow,
I don't wish to see you again,
Or hear of your name spoken,
You can't get round me anymore,
Because my heart is no longer broken.
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Bexstasy
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2010-10-10 22:43:04]
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Re: Words from a healing heart
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by girlbballjunky101 on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 07:28:15 AM AEST
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| That was very interesting write. I was there once and i got pasted it. And happy to hear you did to. :) |
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Re: Words from a healing heart
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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Nice rhythm on this. Good see to another submission from you. You always write well.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Words from a healing heart
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:13:49 AM AEST
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| Interesting. Makes me wonder what you went through. |
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Re: Words from a healing heart
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:34:16 AM AEST
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| Another out standing write just keep doing what you are doing. |
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