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Array ( [sid] => 162712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whatever Happens [time] => 2010-10-09 23:44:00 [hometext] => life [bodytext] => Whatever happens in my life of sin
Just know that I tried to win
I see that golden door, I'm knockin hard,
but they won't let me in
My life's in fast forward
sometimes I lose my mind and then..
I end up right back where i started broken-hearted
and still struggelin
I came from down and out
searching for a better way
Society seems to always lock me out
and tell me that i just need to pray
So if I lose my life
while in the process of finding me
keep searching for that light
even when your too blind to see [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Hooligan785 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Whatever Happens

Contributed by Hooligan785 on Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 11:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Whatever happens in my life of sin
Just know that I tried to win
I see that golden door, I'm knockin hard,
but they won't let me in
My life's in fast forward
sometimes I lose my mind and then..
I end up right back where i started broken-hearted
and still struggelin
I came from down and out
searching for a better way
Society seems to always lock me out
and tell me that i just need to pray
So if I lose my life
while in the process of finding me
keep searching for that light
even when your too blind to see

Copyright © Hooligan785 ... [ 2010-10-09 23:44:00]
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Re: Whatever Happens (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Society sucks.
Keep your faith with God and you'll make it.
Blessings,
emy
Good writing.

Re: Whatever Happens (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 06:55:05 AM AEST
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Whatever Happens...Let it.
;)
Fantastic piece of writing!

Re: Whatever Happens (User Rating: 1 )
by Z-DAWG on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 02:45:05 AM AEST
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love it, i can totaly relate to that, expesualy the life of sin, iv tried hard to get rid of that

Re: Whatever Happens (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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I can relate to this flow
Hang on
the carousel spins round and round

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