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Array ( [sid] => 162629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feelings after a break up..... [time] => 2010-10-04 07:13:16 [hometext] => Poem is how I felt after a relationship that is was in for about 7months... [bodytext] => I wrote my name in the clouds,
But the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
But the water washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
And forever it will stay.
Until the day came,
And you ripped it away.

That day went not so good,
I wanted it to end.
You broke my heart,
But I’m the one to blame……
Afraid that I was going to lose you,
But that came true.
I don’t want you to leave,
But you wanted to…

My heart is trying to heal,
But it can’t on its own,
Because I need you to fix it.

I miss your gentle touch,
And your soft kiss,
Your smile can make me smile.
And your voice is so soothing,
Not hearing it makes me go crazy.

Just you all together,
There is no line of words….
That can explain how I feel about you.
Sometimes the moments feel right,
And want them to last forever.

The way I look at you has changed…
You broke my heart once
Then you did it again….
I can’t trust certain people now….
Because of you…..

Not wanting you to leave,
But I’m moving on but very slowly….
I have to hide the fact that I love you
From so many different people…
But I can’t handle not telling you.

I look at you different…
But I love you the same
Sadly but true…
And I can’t be without you….

My heart skips a beat….
When I feel you against me….
When you’re in my arms…
I want to hold you much longer.

Wanting to tell you
How I feel….
But finding it hard to breathe
Around you….
You take my breath away when I’m around you…
You sweep me right off my feet.




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Feelings after a break up.....

Contributed by girlbballjunky101 on Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 07:13:16 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I wrote my name in the clouds,
But the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
But the water washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
And forever it will stay.
Until the day came,
And you ripped it away.

That day went not so good,
I wanted it to end.
You broke my heart,
But I’m the one to blame……
Afraid that I was going to lose you,
But that came true.
I don’t want you to leave,
But you wanted to…

My heart is trying to heal,
But it can’t on its own,
Because I need you to fix it.

I miss your gentle touch,
And your soft kiss,
Your smile can make me smile.
And your voice is so soothing,
Not hearing it makes me go crazy.

Just you all together,
There is no line of words….
That can explain how I feel about you.
Sometimes the moments feel right,
And want them to last forever.

The way I look at you has changed…
You broke my heart once
Then you did it again….
I can’t trust certain people now….
Because of you…..

Not wanting you to leave,
But I’m moving on but very slowly….
I have to hide the fact that I love you
From so many different people…
But I can’t handle not telling you.

I look at you different…
But I love you the same
Sadly but true…
And I can’t be without you….

My heart skips a beat….
When I feel you against me….
When you’re in my arms…
I want to hold you much longer.

Wanting to tell you
How I feel….
But finding it hard to breathe
Around you….
You take my breath away when I’m around you…
You sweep me right off my feet.




girlbballjunky101, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Feelings after a break up..... (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 08:37:22 AM AEST
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Interesting write. You still have feelings for this guy and yet you write: You broke my heart once, then you did it again. How did he break your heart? Through cheating on you? If so, I think you're better off without him.
Take care, Chris.


Re: Feelings after a break up..... (User Rating: 1 )
by tinybitinsane on Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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i understand :/ keep ya head up i love this post
*tiny*


Re: Feelings after a break up..... (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:17:30 AM AEST
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lost love hurts. Just try to be strong. Keep your head high, and have fun. And write poems :)


Re: Feelings after a break up..... (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 03:00:12 AM AEST
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There is no pain like a broken heart, but it will heal faster if you leave him out of your life. I am doing the same with my ex right now, and every time I talk to her, it brings back old feelings. I tried everything, and have no regrets, and it is best just to move on.




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