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Array ( [sid] => 162603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love After 20 Years. [time] => 2010-10-02 14:24:45 [hometext] => This poem is about a love which start and lost for some reason and after 20 years they came infront of each other same and its a strong feeling that this time they dont want to go back. [bodytext] => Lights shining bright people all over that night
My eyes strike and that was love at first sight
He touched me I sensed him he came close
It feels like flying feels so good but ain't right
That beautiful night that moment then slipped away
New sun rise a new day arrived but he was gone
Brightness fades days doomed nights were restless
The seasons traveled far away withered everything
Then came a season bring a gentle breeze touched my skin
There he was standing again in shining lights among pepole
He came close and whisper in my ear make me shock there
He was standing there for 20 years in the middle of thin air
Just to see me just to love me and to share
Why my eyes couldn’t catch him for those years
Why I was so helpless in the face of my destiny
Now I will fight with my fate and make him my fortune
He is the founder of my love who show me that night what is love
I am ready to give him my love the one he is waiting for
To devote him my love the one I saved for a lifespan
To carry on his name with me.....
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Anbarean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Love After 20 Years.

Contributed by Anbarean on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 02:24:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Lights shining bright people all over that night
My eyes strike and that was love at first sight
He touched me I sensed him he came close
It feels like flying feels so good but ain't right
That beautiful night that moment then slipped away
New sun rise a new day arrived but he was gone
Brightness fades days doomed nights were restless
The seasons traveled far away withered everything
Then came a season bring a gentle breeze touched my skin
There he was standing again in shining lights among pepole
He came close and whisper in my ear make me shock there
He was standing there for 20 years in the middle of thin air
Just to see me just to love me and to share
Why my eyes couldn’t catch him for those years
Why I was so helpless in the face of my destiny
Now I will fight with my fate and make him my fortune
He is the founder of my love who show me that night what is love
I am ready to give him my love the one he is waiting for
To devote him my love the one I saved for a lifespan
To carry on his name with me.....




Copyright © Anbarean ... [ 2010-10-02 14:24:45]
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Re: Love After 20 Years. (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 10:02:49 PM AEST
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I adore this write because of the topic of choice and how your words wrap the entire piece in heartfelt emotion. Love at first sight. Almost a fairytale it seems but something that can warm the soul with possibility. Beautiful lines and touching write my friend.

take care
duff


Re: Love After 20 Years. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nobleclint on Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 05:03:36 PM AEST
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nice poem, luv your start to finish. Keep it up




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