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Array ( [sid] => 162577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hers [time] => 2010-09-30 14:46:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Whilst we are slowly getting older
You’re escaping from my sight
All these thoughts have made me colder
And i figured you were right

You’ll never fill the gap you fit in so precise
Nor will you ever replace the lost mind
But upcoming December is unavoidable
And the fourth is based on demise

Yet i stand alone in grieve
Since you were hold back again
And now i feel deceived
Cause yesterday you told me otherwise

You’re never home with me
But you never will be either
You’re tea is getting colder
As you left again to see her

Talking like you’re him is pleasing
Talking like you’re mine is lying
But i doubt you could ever be him
So being mine would be disappointing
But still...




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[comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gothchick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Hers

Contributed by gothchick on Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 02:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Whilst we are slowly getting older
You’re escaping from my sight
All these thoughts have made me colder
And i figured you were right

You’ll never fill the gap you fit in so precise
Nor will you ever replace the lost mind
But upcoming December is unavoidable
And the fourth is based on demise

Yet i stand alone in grieve
Since you were hold back again
And now i feel deceived
Cause yesterday you told me otherwise

You’re never home with me
But you never will be either
You’re tea is getting colder
As you left again to see her

Talking like you’re him is pleasing
Talking like you’re mine is lying
But i doubt you could ever be him
So being mine would be disappointing
But still...




gothchick, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




Copyright © gothchick ... [ 2010-09-30 14:46:30]
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Re: Hers (User Rating: 1 )
by nrazak1 on Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:32:18 PM AEST
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That was beautiful.


Re: Hers (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:44:44 AM AEST
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Nice stuff. Got the point across well.
Take care, Chris.


Re: Hers (User Rating: 1 )
by NewGuy on Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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excellent job!




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