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Array ( [sid] => 162494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JUMP [time] => 2010-09-26 22:37:12 [hometext] => i've always wondered if this was best as a song or goodbye, depressed, suicidal type of writing... [bodytext] => I use to believe everything
Would be ok in the end
But by the situation
That proves to be incorrect

I’ve traveled high distances
Not just to see the sunrise
I no longer wish to feel
the pain within my beating heart

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
We want to see, your down fall
Jump, the earth will catch you

The voices I hear In my head
Are the very same
In my heart telling me
Loudly screaming in fact

I’m just so hurt
I’m just so confused
The truth is calling loudly
Everyone is saying the same thing

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
We want to see, your down fall
Jump, the earth will catch you

What are you waiting for, The crowd is getting restless
Let yourself fly
There’s no returning now, Jump its your turn to play

the wind in my hair
the sky is so clear
the sun never looked
so beautiful before

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
There’s no returning now
its your turn to play this game



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JUMP

Contributed by moonlitsilverwolf on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 10:37:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I use to believe everything
Would be ok in the end
But by the situation
That proves to be incorrect

I’ve traveled high distances
Not just to see the sunrise
I no longer wish to feel
the pain within my beating heart

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
We want to see, your down fall
Jump, the earth will catch you

The voices I hear In my head
Are the very same
In my heart telling me
Loudly screaming in fact

I’m just so hurt
I’m just so confused
The truth is calling loudly
Everyone is saying the same thing

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
We want to see, your down fall
Jump, the earth will catch you

What are you waiting for, The crowd is getting restless
Let yourself fly
There’s no returning now, Jump its your turn to play

the wind in my hair
the sky is so clear
the sun never looked
so beautiful before

Jump, were waiting, Jump, were waiting
There’s no returning now
its your turn to play this game



moonlitsilverwolf, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




Copyright © moonlitsilverwolf ... [ 2010-09-26 22:37:12]
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Re: JUMP (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:27:41 AM AEST
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Mmm. Sounds like a suicidal write where you 'no longer want to feel the pain in my beating heart'. So instead of fighting it, you decide to end it the easy way. A little sad but written clearly to describe what's on in the mind of this person.
Take care, Chris.


Re: JUMP (User Rating: 1 )
by samueloliverrr on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 06:51:37 AM AEST
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love it, great job!


Re: JUMP (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 05:01:56 AM AEST
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i really like this as a song... songs can be about anything that means something to someone, music is such an incredible form of expression, if these words were put to music i know it would be understood and felt by so many...




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