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Array ( [sid] => 162486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Know Better Now [time] => 2010-09-26 11:24:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You say I'm bitter

I say you are confused

You let her walk on you

I have planted the seed in your mind

I told you she doesn't deserve you

The seed's thirst is quenched with the water

Of her nagging voice

The soil is the memories of her cold looks

Her silence when you unknowingly didn't console her

She doesn't appreciate what she has in you

And honestly I didn't either

But I know better now

When that seed of doubt as bloomed into a

Resentful thorn bush

I will be there to burn it and clear the ashes

Maybe then I can replant the seed of our lost love. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CarrieLindeman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Know Better Now

Contributed by CarrieLindeman on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:24:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You say I'm bitter

I say you are confused

You let her walk on you

I have planted the seed in your mind

I told you she doesn't deserve you

The seed's thirst is quenched with the water

Of her nagging voice

The soil is the memories of her cold looks

Her silence when you unknowingly didn't console her

She doesn't appreciate what she has in you

And honestly I didn't either

But I know better now

When that seed of doubt as bloomed into a

Resentful thorn bush

I will be there to burn it and clear the ashes

Maybe then I can replant the seed of our lost love.

Copyright © CarrieLindeman ... [ 2010-09-26 11:24:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Know Better Now (User Rating: 1 )
by jennguy41 on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST
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I know what you are saying

Re: I Know Better Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Dionlogue on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:34:55 PM AEST
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That is a well thought, meaningful poem :)
I thoroughly enojyed it

Please read and comment on one of mine :)

Re: I Know Better Now (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitSilverWolf on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:37:52 PM AEST
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great write, your title says the same thing im thinking in simular situation of my own
~Moonlitsilverwolf

Re: I Know Better Now (User Rating: 1 )
by xshelbyx on Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST
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very good symbolism with the seed/plant

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