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Her lifes outta control.
She hates the world.
After her house burned to the ground.
Her parents died.
Her brother died. Everyone died.
And she's left alone.
should she pull the trigger?

She loaded the bullets.
puts it on her dresser, she takes a shower
She pulls out her best dress.
she's thinking too hard.
Before she was happy.
Not a bad thought crossed her mind.
now she wonders if she should pull the trigger.

She wonders who'll find her.
How long whould it take for them to find her?
Is she gonna see her parents, her brother?
Are they waiting for her?
she grabs the gun, sits on her bed.
points it to her head.
in the mirror she smiles to herself...
And she pulls the trigger.

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the decision was already made T_T

Contributed by tinybitinsane on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:14:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She thought about it everyday.
Her lifes outta control.
She hates the world.
After her house burned to the ground.
Her parents died.
Her brother died. Everyone died.
And she's left alone.
should she pull the trigger?

She loaded the bullets.
puts it on her dresser, she takes a shower
She pulls out her best dress.
she's thinking too hard.
Before she was happy.
Not a bad thought crossed her mind.
now she wonders if she should pull the trigger.

She wonders who'll find her.
How long whould it take for them to find her?
Is she gonna see her parents, her brother?
Are they waiting for her?
she grabs the gun, sits on her bed.
points it to her head.
in the mirror she smiles to herself...
And she pulls the trigger.

Copyright © tinybitinsane ... [ 2010-09-26 02:14:24]
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Re: the decision was already made T_T (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:20:01 AM AEST
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Well I hope this is just really good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: the decision was already made T_T (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 10:58:28 AM AEST
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Wow!!! This is very deep and heavy going, although the subject is painful you deal with it in a very real, down to earth way. Well written.

Re: the decision was already made T_T (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitSilverWolf on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:34:43 PM AEST
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nice write, and you seem to have really focused the emotional descriptions of what anyone in this situation would go through
~Moonlitsilverwolf

Re: the decision was already made T_T (User Rating: 1 )
by jennguy41 on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 01:00:52 AM AEST
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wow! this is deep and I feel her pain and can almost understand her good job

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