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Array ( [sid] => 162416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BEFORE YOU [time] => 2010-09-21 12:40:39 [hometext] => I wrote this for my amazing girlfriend while she was in England and France for two weeks :) It is also my first poem so i know its not toooo great but please be honest of what you think of it [bodytext] => Before you, my life was a mystery
I was convinced I was nothing
And because of you, that's history
Now i'm loved, i feel like something

Before you, I was in the dark
I was alone and Scared
It's now like I'm at a park
My love is finally shared

Before you, i never knew
Love could be so great
I heard "I love you too"
It flushed away the hate

Before you, my heart was shattered
There was just a gaping big hole
Now it's like none of it mattered
Because you've made it whole

After you, my world is bright
I don't feel the hate
You turned on my light
You made me believe in fate

By Dion Logue
For Johanna Vodane Weavers :) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Dionlogue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
BEFORE YOU

Contributed by Dionlogue on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 12:40:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Before you, my life was a mystery
I was convinced I was nothing
And because of you, that's history
Now i'm loved, i feel like something

Before you, I was in the dark
I was alone and Scared
It's now like I'm at a park
My love is finally shared

Before you, i never knew
Love could be so great
I heard "I love you too"
It flushed away the hate

Before you, my heart was shattered
There was just a gaping big hole
Now it's like none of it mattered
Because you've made it whole

After you, my world is bright
I don't feel the hate
You turned on my light
You made me believe in fate

By Dion Logue
For Johanna Vodane Weavers :)




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Re: BEFORE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 01:26:10 PM AEST
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Well done. She certainly sounds like a special lady to you. Hope you have a lot of happiness together.
Take care, Chris.


Re: BEFORE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by NewGuy on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 11:46:03 PM AEST
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you can relally feel the emotion behind this. A geat testiment i enjoed it




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