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[title] => The Deep
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[bodytext] => Sunrise invites you To view the birth of day As you lay upon the sand Your mind begins to stray The alluring giant Unlike you he ever sleeps Beckons you to come forth And gaze in into its deep Cool water covers your toes A gull takes to air The beach is yours alone There is no need to share Further now it calls to you Gentle are my waves For a child could venture out Without the strength of brave Past the knees and past the hips The water welcomes you Deeper yet the giant pleads You will feel the power too Under the waves you dive down Wonders do unfold Creatures of all the colors Beauty of never told The giant smiles with glee Each time that you dive The splendor unseen from above In the deep they thrive For what seems like hours The giant guides you true Past all of creation That you never knew As you turn to bid farewell And thank you to your host You see the sand were you perch Isnt quite so close You have been deceived by the best As many have before Captured by this temptation Pulled far from the shore As the land begins to shrink The waves start to swell The giant who gently spoke Now begins to yell Water crashes over you As you cough and choke And as you swim you lose ground With every single stroke Tired now can fight no more The giant pulls you near The deep I shall show you Nothing more to fear Faster now you descend The world begins to fade As water fills your lungs You know you were betrayed Deeper yet and further down Till you reach the deep Because the giant never does Forever must you sleep As you give in to the dark This is your last day Then you release your soul In the deep you will stay Author, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 43 [informant] => NewGuy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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