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That's when I'll tell you how you make me feel
You are what I desire
I won't do you wrong
Just hold tight onto the dream of you and me

When the moon wakes for the last time my eyes will see
I will have had the greatest life man could think
Just by the words you speak and the air you breathe
The last beat of my heart wouldn't have gone to waste
Giving me one last second to take a breath, to take a moment
My life with you would flash before my eyes
And you would be the last thought through my mind
If I could, I'd whisper you three last words,
"I love you," and I would hope you knew
I'm the proudest, happiest person this world has known
Because I had you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 901 [topic] => 2 [informant] => the_unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Because Of You

Contributed by the_unknown on Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 04:41:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



When the goodnight sun touches the blue ocean
That's when I'll tell you how you make me feel
You are what I desire
I won't do you wrong
Just hold tight onto the dream of you and me

When the moon wakes for the last time my eyes will see
I will have had the greatest life man could think
Just by the words you speak and the air you breathe
The last beat of my heart wouldn't have gone to waste
Giving me one last second to take a breath, to take a moment
My life with you would flash before my eyes
And you would be the last thought through my mind
If I could, I'd whisper you three last words,
"I love you," and I would hope you knew
I'm the proudest, happiest person this world has known
Because I had you




Copyright © the_unknown ... [ 2010-09-16 16:41:47]
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Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Vamp3ric on Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 10:33:17 PM AEST
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I will say you should share this poem very good!!!!


Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th September 2010 @ 03:23:26 AM AEST
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I, as well, think you should. Oh, and that opening line? Excellent!

You can tell this poem was written from the heart and you did a beautiful job.

Thank you.

Tim


Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 02:24:22 PM AEST
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Oh definate this is to be shared,
I felt the true emotion in this,
Thank you for sharing
SP


Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by suzyo on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 04:09:11 AM AEST
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You should most definately share this with her. It would break my heart to know someone felt this way about me, and never said anything.


Re: Because Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitSilverWolf on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:55:38 PM AEST
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yes do share dont hesitate, for the greatest regrets in life you will have are the risks you didnt take, good write
~Moonlitsilverwolf




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