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Can't push you out of my head.
[And I'm not sure I even want to]
I love your smiling face,
I love your bright blue eyes.
I love your sense of humor,
I hate it when you sigh.
I look forward to seeing you everyday,
And I'm often tired now,
Because I stay up too late,
Dreaming about you.
Everything you say makes me laugh,
Your smile makes me smile.
I love the way you say my name,
And the sound of your laugh echoes through my mind.
I can't wait to hold your hand again,
I can't wait to see your shining face.
Always so full of joy,
You've lifted me up from the ground,
You've taken me out of my shell.
You've aroused something deep within me,
My outlook on this world has changed.
Everything is beautiful,
Especially you.
You're gorgeous, I love you.
Night has turned to day,
And now the nightmare is over.
You are the sun in my sky.

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The Sun in My Sky

Contributed by sodapopsuicide on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I thought a lot about you today,
Can't push you out of my head.
[And I'm not sure I even want to]
I love your smiling face,
I love your bright blue eyes.
I love your sense of humor,
I hate it when you sigh.
I look forward to seeing you everyday,
And I'm often tired now,
Because I stay up too late,
Dreaming about you.
Everything you say makes me laugh,
Your smile makes me smile.
I love the way you say my name,
And the sound of your laugh echoes through my mind.
I can't wait to hold your hand again,
I can't wait to see your shining face.
Always so full of joy,
You've lifted me up from the ground,
You've taken me out of my shell.
You've aroused something deep within me,
My outlook on this world has changed.
Everything is beautiful,
Especially you.
You're gorgeous, I love you.
Night has turned to day,
And now the nightmare is over.
You are the sun in my sky.

Copyright © sodapopsuicide ... [ 2003-04-19 11:05:00]
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Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:57:53 PM AEST
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Very good write...good expression I enjoyed it.

Theresa

Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:20:52 PM AEST
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lovely heartfelt write!! Well done
Michelle

Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:03:04 PM AEST
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ahhhh I love it!
I reminds me about my love for a very very special friend of mine.

Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:58:20 PM AEST
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excellent work!!! I feel this way too! I just love your style..!!!
<3 Sara

Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:35:38 PM AEST
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*smiles softly* Hey, Nat... looks like you've finally gotten a little taste of the way Christopher and I feel. It's a great poem, and you're a great poetess.

Re: The Sun in My Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:31:20 PM AEST
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excellent poem!

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