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Array ( [sid] => 162255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's like... [time] => 2010-09-11 09:22:08 [hometext] => This is an old poem of mine. Gosh, I'm so happy I have somewhere to share my poetry and read other people's! :) [bodytext] => It's like...
You're holding onto my heart,
Squeezing tighter, tighter,
I never wanted this to start,
I'm meant to be a 'fighter'.

It's like...
No one can understand,
I've tried and tried to explain,
Can't you let go? Let go of my hand,
Save me from this pain.

It's like...
I'm lost in my own dreams,
Ones that will never come true,
Now, nothing's ever what it seems,
I'll never be with you.

It's like...
I almost had you before,
You were everything to me,
When it was over, my heart tore,
How come you couldn't see?

It's like...
I've wasted so much time,
Like you'd ever read this,
I hope you know how bright you shine,
I hope you know you're missed. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Bexstasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
It's like...

Contributed by Bexstasy on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:22:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It's like...
You're holding onto my heart,
Squeezing tighter, tighter,
I never wanted this to start,
I'm meant to be a 'fighter'.

It's like...
No one can understand,
I've tried and tried to explain,
Can't you let go? Let go of my hand,
Save me from this pain.

It's like...
I'm lost in my own dreams,
Ones that will never come true,
Now, nothing's ever what it seems,
I'll never be with you.

It's like...
I almost had you before,
You were everything to me,
When it was over, my heart tore,
How come you couldn't see?

It's like...
I've wasted so much time,
Like you'd ever read this,
I hope you know how bright you shine,
I hope you know you're missed.




Copyright © Bexstasy ... [ 2010-09-11 09:22:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by neverlosehope on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:42:07 AM AEST
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This is a really sweet and beautiful poem. you have written this well and its really effective and powerful. thanks for sharing it with us xxx


Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentMuse on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 11:00:17 AM AEST
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It's a really good write, very meaningful and strong.


Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 04:22:51 PM AEST
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I think many can relate to the pain in this write,and hopefully there is comfort in having written it as much as it will bring comfort to those who read it well written


Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:59:01 PM AEST
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Good writing.
Keep it up.
blessings,
emy


Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by natizzle on Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 04:40:34 AM AEST
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awesome write. makes me feel a something, so thanks. x


Re: It's like... (User Rating: 1 )
by CarrieLindeman on Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 05:30:57 PM AEST
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I loved this poem. Great! The last stanza especially hit home. Love it.




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