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Array ( [sid] => 162195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Midnight Dreaming [time] => 2010-09-07 08:16:20 [hometext] => Physical emotion and the way love touches us all. My first poem after a long hiatus [bodytext] => Mid-Night Dreaming


The room is dark, too dark to see
but she is there I can feel her presence
softly she calls me over
fumbling in the shadows
reaching out for some validation
to calm my wild and unrestrained mind
she is soft to to the touch
I feel her warm breath on the nape of my neck
and her touch caressing at my heart
her scent is intoxicating
it makes my pulse race
gentle beads of sweat form on my skin
this is all so alien to me
unsure yet unafraid
our lips meet and her kiss makes my head spin
in the darkness and the silence
our love is born



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Midnight Dreaming

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 08:16:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Mid-Night Dreaming


The room is dark, too dark to see
but she is there I can feel her presence
softly she calls me over
fumbling in the shadows
reaching out for some validation
to calm my wild and unrestrained mind
she is soft to to the touch
I feel her warm breath on the nape of my neck
and her touch caressing at my heart
her scent is intoxicating
it makes my pulse race
gentle beads of sweat form on my skin
this is all so alien to me
unsure yet unafraid
our lips meet and her kiss makes my head spin
in the darkness and the silence
our love is born



Immortal-Dragon21, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

As of this documentation, you have 46 poems posted and only 10 interactive comments. BEFORE posting another poem, please, at the very least, bring your comment count up to 47. That means you must leave 37 comments on work by other site members BEFORE posting another poem.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




Copyright © Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2010-09-07 08:16:20]
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Re: Midnight Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 10:43:46 AM AEST
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Very beautiful, tender write.
Good to see you writing again.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: Midnight Dreaming (User Rating: 1 )
by TryingMyLuck on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 11:03:31 PM AEST
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Nice visual wording, I like it.




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