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Array ( [sid] => 162143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the chase [time] => 2010-09-03 16:00:15 [hometext] => young, alone, and so undone,, [bodytext] => We were young, so alone. Its amazingly strange how we all seem to change. You
were my everything and i was ur queen. I kno we speak to not forget but dont
forget we were young, alone, and so undone. We lost our innocence. Shooting
stars from your backyard with ur pointer finger, i knew u were changing back
then. Staring at u with my sleep eyes, i thought it a dream. Lock the doors from
the future cuz we'd rather stay in the past with eachother. In disguise we hid
from it even tho i knew it would catch up eventually. We didnt know wat u would
become in the future. The future came and changed you... For the worse.
i changed but for the better. Is it bad to be glad to see it's in the past? I
was foolish enough to think that we could've out run the future. You soak in my
sorrow for me because i havent time for that.

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the chase

Contributed by tinybitinsane on Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

We were young, so alone. Its amazingly strange how we all seem to change. You
were my everything and i was ur queen. I kno we speak to not forget but dont
forget we were young, alone, and so undone. We lost our innocence. Shooting
stars from your backyard with ur pointer finger, i knew u were changing back
then. Staring at u with my sleep eyes, i thought it a dream. Lock the doors from
the future cuz we'd rather stay in the past with eachother. In disguise we hid
from it even tho i knew it would catch up eventually. We didnt know wat u would
become in the future. The future came and changed you... For the worse.
i changed but for the better. Is it bad to be glad to see it's in the past? I
was foolish enough to think that we could've out run the future. You soak in my
sorrow for me because i havent time for that.

Copyright © tinybitinsane ... [ 2010-09-03 16:00:15]
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Re: the chase (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 01:08:06 AM AEST
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This is another good piece of writing. Your poetry has a certain flow to it, as for thinking you could outrun the future, well we all think that sometime or another and there's nothing foolish about that. Well done.

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