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Array ( [sid] => 1621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me In... [time] => 2002-08-02 20:16:37 [hometext] => I wrote this to a male friend of mine, who is also an ex boyfriend, who had a wall so great that I couldn't get through to him. [bodytext] => Darkness, Emptiness,
There was once something there.
But you've pushed it away,
It seems you don't care.

Your reasons, I know not.
Friendship or love?
You plead the fifth.
None of the above…

You're never straight with me,
It seems I just can't win.
You can't be open,
You wont let me in.

Give me some credit,
Me, some one who cares.
I know it's not what you need,
But it's time that you've shared.

Why do you resist?
What is it that pulls you away?
Why can't I know?
What can't you say?

It's not fair to do this,
To play the façade…
You are so different now,
I think it to be odd.

I promise you can trust me,
So just open up!
You can talk to me in Friendship,
Companionship or love…

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Crys [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Let Me In...

Contributed by Crys on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 08:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Darkness, Emptiness,
There was once something there.
But you've pushed it away,
It seems you don't care.

Your reasons, I know not.
Friendship or love?
You plead the fifth.
None of the above…

You're never straight with me,
It seems I just can't win.
You can't be open,
You wont let me in.

Give me some credit,
Me, some one who cares.
I know it's not what you need,
But it's time that you've shared.

Why do you resist?
What is it that pulls you away?
Why can't I know?
What can't you say?

It's not fair to do this,
To play the façade…
You are so different now,
I think it to be odd.

I promise you can trust me,
So just open up!
You can talk to me in Friendship,
Companionship or love…

Copyright Â© Crys ... [ 2002-08-02 20:16:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let Me In... (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:28:23 AM AEST
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Nicely written and heartfelt poem Crys.
Chrissie

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