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Beautiful Nature's Bliss
Contributed by
Avataar
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 08:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Quietly I sit beneath the trees,
And let nature talk to me with it's breeze,
My heart that was lonely is now filled,
with a companion in the form of the wind.
The air is filled with humidity and mist,
The dampness feels like a gentle kiss;
raindrops fall from the towering trees;
It is a sight that can only please.
A deep breath I take and fill my being;
With the sweet smell of wet mud and grass so green;
My eyes are closed but yet I see;
Nature working in such harmony.
The raindrops falling resonate through the leaves;
Erase all the noises in my head and leave me at ease;
The sound of rain water joining the creek,
takes away every thought that made me weak.
My feet I dip in the cold running water;
Only to find my hardened heart turn softer;
O beautiful beautiful nature's bliss!
How could I have missed all this?
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Avataar
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2010-08-31 08:10:18]
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Re: Beautiful Nature's Bliss
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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| This is cool and soothing and so well constructed. Love the way it rhymes, nature makes you feel so at ease and with this piece I could feel at ease while reading. Nice one. |
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