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Array ( [sid] => 16208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why can't you love me? [time] => 2003-04-18 18:05:00 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote about someone very special to me, he is the greatest thing that has ever happened to me and he doesn't even know it yet. [bodytext] => I thought about you quite a few nights
I never knew you'd make me feel so right

I don't want to pressure you, or scare you away
But I think about you each and everyday

To me your so addicting
To you that must be sickening

I know you want nothing more than a kiss
But after you leave, your all that I miss

You touched my face so tender
When your here my hearts in a splendor

But why? I never felt like this, especially from one touch, one kiss
You see these are the opportunities I miss

It's never the right time, never the right place
But, I think things would be different in this case

I promise to never hurt you, and I promise to never lie
Because everything you do and everything you say
I think is wonderful and beautiful in every way

Your so honest, and caring
I wish you were up for sharing

I understand all the things going on
But is that all are we done?

I think you should open your mind and let your heart lead the way
It will tell you the right things to say

Maybe it works and maybe it doesn't but in the end I'll prove to you I am everything everyone else wasn't

You'll never know, you'll never give it a chance
You can just walk away without a second glance

Because you've been burned
But not by me
The best thing is right in front of you
Can't you see?

But I guess I'll take what I can get
Because honestly and truly your the greatest man I've ever met.

TAJ [comments] => 8 [counter] => 547 [topic] => 33 [informant] => lovesucks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Why can't you love me?

Contributed by lovesucks on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I thought about you quite a few nights
I never knew you'd make me feel so right

I don't want to pressure you, or scare you away
But I think about you each and everyday

To me your so addicting
To you that must be sickening

I know you want nothing more than a kiss
But after you leave, your all that I miss

You touched my face so tender
When your here my hearts in a splendor

But why? I never felt like this, especially from one touch, one kiss
You see these are the opportunities I miss

It's never the right time, never the right place
But, I think things would be different in this case

I promise to never hurt you, and I promise to never lie
Because everything you do and everything you say
I think is wonderful and beautiful in every way

Your so honest, and caring
I wish you were up for sharing

I understand all the things going on
But is that all are we done?

I think you should open your mind and let your heart lead the way
It will tell you the right things to say

Maybe it works and maybe it doesn't but in the end I'll prove to you I am everything everyone else wasn't

You'll never know, you'll never give it a chance
You can just walk away without a second glance

Because you've been burned
But not by me
The best thing is right in front of you
Can't you see?

But I guess I'll take what I can get
Because honestly and truly your the greatest man I've ever met.

TAJ




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Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by sodapopsuicide on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:30:18 PM AEST
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beautiful.. :D


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:30:56 PM AEST
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Very, Very...wow!!! honestly very touching and from the heart, I do hope things will work out for you in the end. Great Write ~MetalMouth


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:50:38 PM AEST
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thank you so much for your input very much appreciated. It will I think :)


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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Touching, emotion write. I enjoyed very much!
<3 Sara


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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nice poem, i hope it works out for you


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:53:37 PM AEST
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hi


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by VonDutchChick08 on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:13:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem!!! I loved it from beginning to end. Keep up the good work!! :)


Re: Why can't you love me? (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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Totally Awesome! I wish that one day i can find a man that feel this way about. Keep righting your great!
~Amy




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