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The Love in Me
Contributed by
elisabeth
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Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 12:27:44 PM in AEST
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Scandalous I say
How numbness can replace a burn
That everlasting moment
Where one's mind races
Chases
Embraces
A lovely thought...
And never ends
No never
A dream can it be
The force pulsating to and fro
A nucleus can't implode
In slumber's moment
Atonement
I own it
A fairy tale...
Always searching
Always
Dormant sense arise
Love returns to awaken dead
And redemption draws closer
Truth's reclamation
Celebration
Of sensation
Seizing the day...
Finally whole
Forever
Copyright ©
elisabeth
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2010-08-26 12:27:44]
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Re: The Love in Me
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by JustinLW on
Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 08:01:31 PM AEST
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| That was very intense. I liked this poem a lot. You are very talented. |
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Re: The Love in Me
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 10:29:01 PM AEST
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Redemption...
I wonder, will redemption set us free?
Beautiful by the way. It touched my heart. It may just be the codeine and being back in a place of old love, or maybe its just your name (or the irony of your name)
In any case, keep writing.
Always, Abraham |
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Re: The Love in Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:41:43 AM AEST
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If I said I new exactly what this poem was about, I'd be a liar but this I do know:
I love the way it reads. It has such a great rhythm to it...the way you did that ol' rhyme scheme.
Yeah, that's the stuff!!!
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: The Love in Me
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 05:28:45 PM AEST
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I agree with Tim....i may not know EXACTLY what it was saying, but i sure like the way it was said! :D
P.S. If you are anything like me, you might want them to edit it and fix 'doormant'. |
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Re: The Love in Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 01:04:07 AM AEST
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| Yep, reading it again!!! Lovin' it! |
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Re: The Love in Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 02:53:15 PM AEST
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beautifully enchanting,
hugs n' love nessa |
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