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Array ( [sid] => 162022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my reminder remains. . . [time] => 2010-08-26 07:24:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => there are ghosts, lost, in your eyes. . .

arriving, in timely fashion, or exisisting ever-more. . .
arriving. . . to denude the complexity of staunch reflections
awash in the other worldy colour & glint of words

lost. . .
as lost as you,
arrhythmic bearer of amputated tears
. . .you've cut them out
bare-boned,
from among the pondering
vessels
deveined, free-falling to puddle near nonsense

as immortal as the artful. . .
as vigilant as the artless. . . the less than full sepulcher
that exudes ripe thoughts & wayward notions

with the stubbornness of wings
availibility, omnipresent & oppressive.

with the caressing nature of shadow

the composition befitting such vulnerability
evolving so profane. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 13 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

my reminder remains. . .

Contributed by elle on Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 07:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

there are ghosts, lost, in your eyes. . .

arriving, in timely fashion, or exisisting ever-more. . .
arriving. . . to denude the complexity of staunch reflections
awash in the other worldy colour & glint of words

lost. . .
as lost as you,
arrhythmic bearer of amputated tears
. . .you've cut them out
bare-boned,
from among the pondering
vessels
deveined, free-falling to puddle near nonsense

as immortal as the artful. . .
as vigilant as the artless. . . the less than full sepulcher
that exudes ripe thoughts & wayward notions

with the stubbornness of wings
availibility, omnipresent & oppressive.

with the caressing nature of shadow

the composition befitting such vulnerability
evolving so profane.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2010-08-26 07:24:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my reminder remains. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 08:31:56 AM AEST
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Love this , as I do most all your writes. Here is the line I wished was mine. LOL! Really though great read.

'as immortal as the artful. . .
as vigilant as the artless. . .

ming

Re: my reminder remains. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:49:43 AM AEST
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there are ghosts, lost, in your eyes. . .

And you keep my head spinning from that point forward!

Wowness! ! !

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

Re: my reminder remains. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 02:41:20 AM AEST
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Great stuff. I just HAVE to past this stanza, it was a stunner:

'lost. . .
as lost as you,
arrhythmic bearer of amputated tears
. . .you've cut them out
bare-boned,
from among the pondering
vessels
deveined, free-falling to puddle near nonsense'

I've recently hit a crisis in my poetry, and I can't figure out why my poetry's been going downhill. This is a reminder of what great poetry is like.

-Phil

Re: my reminder remains. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 11:47:52 AM AEST
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I really liked this.

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