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Torn dreams,
Shattered hope,
Jewelry in the trash.
You've done these things to me,
But I tell myself I don't care.
And when I try to ignore you,
That beautiful smile grabs me,
Those eyes capture me,
They won't let me go.
I laugh at your jokes,
Even though I can't hear them.
The thoughts of what could have been race through my mind,
And it's too much to bear.
I love to see you.
I hate to see you.
I try so hard to hate you,
After all you've done to me,
But when I approach you,
Ready and confident to speak my mind,
[I memorized what I would say last night]
My body goes numb.
You're surrounded by friends,
And I start to realize,
I want to be one of them.
Let's be friends.
Then you say we ARE friends..
But are we?
Are you sure?
I love you.
I hate you.
I am in heaven in your presence.
I can't stand you.
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I love you, I hate you

Contributed by sodapopsuicide on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Crumpled paper,
Torn dreams,
Shattered hope,
Jewelry in the trash.
You've done these things to me,
But I tell myself I don't care.
And when I try to ignore you,
That beautiful smile grabs me,
Those eyes capture me,
They won't let me go.
I laugh at your jokes,
Even though I can't hear them.
The thoughts of what could have been race through my mind,
And it's too much to bear.
I love to see you.
I hate to see you.
I try so hard to hate you,
After all you've done to me,
But when I approach you,
Ready and confident to speak my mind,
[I memorized what I would say last night]
My body goes numb.
You're surrounded by friends,
And I start to realize,
I want to be one of them.
Let's be friends.
Then you say we ARE friends..
But are we?
Are you sure?
I love you.
I hate you.
I am in heaven in your presence.
I can't stand you.

Copyright © sodapopsuicide ... [ 2003-04-18 12:35:00]
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Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:40:31 PM AEST
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great expression well done
Michelle

Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 09:43:30 PM AEST
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Ready and confident to speak my mind,
[I memorized what I would say last night]
My body goes numb.
You're surrounded by friends,
And I start to realize,
I want to be one of them.

This is me all the way.... I loved this... !!! Great write!
<3 SAra

Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:39:08 PM AEST
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Wow... amazing, absolutely fabulous. You've just expressed something I've been trying to put into poetry for months now. Great job. (This is Jess, by the way.)

Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:51:29 PM AEST
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this poem tells everything that happened with my ex boyfriend! It looks like this happens to alot of girls out there! Great poem! love:::Kirby

Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 10:50:37 PM AEST
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wonderful write, I can relate to your poem, We all have love, hate relationships. Is this normal? I don' know.

Re: I love you, I hate you (User Rating: 1 )
by EmilyMichaela on Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 06:21:11 PM AEST
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This really is great. It's so blunt the way each line is said but they roll so smoothly into the next

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