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Array ( [sid] => 161909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A tear falls [time] => 2010-08-20 14:16:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit I sigh
I watch detached
looking in
from
the outside.
Illuminating
the darkness
is the moon so bright
as I wonder
what I should do with my life.

Only feelings of doom
flow
in my empty room
emotionally I'm so hollow
don't know what to do,
every time
I let someone inside
they cut me deep
I bleed
and escape to the shadows to hide.

Illuminated by the moon
in the mirror
is a face
I don't know who it is
and
my heart slowly breaks,
all the confusions and Illusions
make me tremble and sigh
A tear falls
as I start to cry. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 48 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A tear falls

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:16:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I sit I sigh
I watch detached
looking in
from
the outside.
Illuminating
the darkness
is the moon so bright
as I wonder
what I should do with my life.

Only feelings of doom
flow
in my empty room
emotionally I'm so hollow
don't know what to do,
every time
I let someone inside
they cut me deep
I bleed
and escape to the shadows to hide.

Illuminated by the moon
in the mirror
is a face
I don't know who it is
and
my heart slowly breaks,
all the confusions and Illusions
make me tremble and sigh
A tear falls
as I start to cry.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2010-08-20 14:16:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A tear falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Rasberry on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 08:46:33 PM AEST
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Women complain about men hurting them and making them cry but we .. Sumtyms i do it ..do the exact same if not worse.nice poem.

Re: A tear falls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 09:37:02 PM AEST
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Now u 'bout got me crying.
Good writing even tho it's so sad.
You can cry on my shoulder.
blessings,
emy

Re: A tear falls (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 05:48:21 AM AEST
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This is a really super poem. You write with great sensitivity. Well done.

Re: A tear falls (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 11:28:17 AM AEST
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sad yet a compelling write..nice job*

Re: A tear falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:19:30 PM AEST
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I can empathize with this. Nicely written, with great fluency.

-Phil

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