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broad daylight uncovered secrets,
strayed the path so straight and narrow,
while shadows shift un noticed

Subtle message loud and clear
in parables engraved in stone,
synthetic seasons manifests,
un-holy intervention

In truth awaits ,all answers sought
in faith, the strength to overcome ,
denial blinds us to the fact
that someone's playing God

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Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)

Contributed by UNORTHODOX on Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 02:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Closing in like a nightmare peaking,
broad daylight uncovered secrets,
strayed the path so straight and narrow,
while shadows shift un noticed

Subtle message loud and clear
in parables engraved in stone,
synthetic seasons manifests,
un-holy intervention

In truth awaits ,all answers sought
in faith, the strength to overcome ,
denial blinds us to the fact
that someone's playing God

Copyright © UNORTHODOX ... [ 2010-08-19 14:44:08]
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 10:51:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
really good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 04:42:06 AM AEST
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Nice poem with an interesting ending.

-Phil

Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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Intersting flow

Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniellemarie on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:39:37 PM AEST
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I like the whole vibe goin on here nicely written
-DanielleMarie-**

Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 01:50:49 PM AEST
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You wrote, "the strength to overcome"
So classic, Yet ,so well done

such a nicely weaved tapestry
of wisdom at that late hour
if I could, I know I would
just want to climb that tower.

Another one of your "great ones"!

Thumbs up!
2bpositive

Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day) (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 02:27:38 PM AEST
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The fallen infiltrated the minds
Of weak, the unknowing and ignorant
and now free reign is out of control
I love your work

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