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Array ( [sid] => 161881 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Help [time] => 2010-08-18 08:21:05 [hometext] => Written a little while back, but feelin this way right about now.. [bodytext] =>

I don't know whats wrong with me
it hurts deep in my chest
other see what i can't see
please can you run some tests?

Its cold sometimes, and yet it burns
you think you know whats wrong?
what did i do, that i deserve
to feel this way this long?

Are there pills to make me numb?
A shot so i'll forget
the times i never won
the things i'll never get?

I need your help, let me know
what do i need to do?
To make my mind let things go
start fresh, start over new.

Pen to paper how i feel
bur words just don't come close
what do I need to do to heal
what can you diagnose?

I've hid the pain from day to day
still some see through my mask
can you make it go away?
or is it too much to ask?

Will the sun come up for me
or will my life stay night?
will the past mistakes release
the memories they blind?

You discovered what i have
some lives it often takes
impossible to cure the wrath
of an old loves heartache. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 121 [topic] => 32 [informant] => JamesKistner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Help

Contributed by JamesKistner on Wednesday, 18th August 2010 @ 08:21:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry





I don't know whats wrong with me
it hurts deep in my chest
other see what i can't see
please can you run some tests?

Its cold sometimes, and yet it burns
you think you know whats wrong?
what did i do, that i deserve
to feel this way this long?

Are there pills to make me numb?
A shot so i'll forget
the times i never won
the things i'll never get?

I need your help, let me know
what do i need to do?
To make my mind let things go
start fresh, start over new.

Pen to paper how i feel
bur words just don't come close
what do I need to do to heal
what can you diagnose?

I've hid the pain from day to day
still some see through my mask
can you make it go away?
or is it too much to ask?

Will the sun come up for me
or will my life stay night?
will the past mistakes release
the memories they blind?

You discovered what i have
some lives it often takes
impossible to cure the wrath
of an old loves heartache.




Copyright © JamesKistner ... [ 2010-08-18 08:21:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Help (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:19:23 PM AEST
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some wounds take a long time to heal
I feel you on this flow.


Re: Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniellemarie on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:48:12 PM AEST
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Sometimes we meet people in life and their ghost will haunt us forever, even when you find a new love their face will never be erased from our sleepy minds
-DanielleMarie-




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