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Array ( [sid] => 161851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living the Lie You're Mine [time] => 2010-08-17 10:31:03 [hometext] => Haven't touched this girl in years and still she's in my dreams.... [bodytext] =>
My life changed the day we met
I felt it deep inside,
and everyday I think to regret
I'm living the lie you're mine.

When I look into your eyes
I pretend you and me,
but you'll never see the tears I hide
when I think of what we could be.

And When I'm holding you I think
how something so wrong could feel so right,
and how it could all be gone in a blink
while I'm living the lie you're mine.

And it hurts me to know one day you'll leave
to be with the one you love,
when everything I love gets set free
are my feelings for you not enough?

I'd like to be your everything
your life, your shoulder, and sunshine,
but the truth keeps bringing back the pain
I'm living the lie you're mine. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => JamesKistner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Living the Lie You're Mine

Contributed by JamesKistner on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 10:31:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My life changed the day we met
I felt it deep inside,
and everyday I think to regret
I'm living the lie you're mine.

When I look into your eyes
I pretend you and me,
but you'll never see the tears I hide
when I think of what we could be.

And When I'm holding you I think
how something so wrong could feel so right,
and how it could all be gone in a blink
while I'm living the lie you're mine.

And it hurts me to know one day you'll leave
to be with the one you love,
when everything I love gets set free
are my feelings for you not enough?

I'd like to be your everything
your life, your shoulder, and sunshine,
but the truth keeps bringing back the pain
I'm living the lie you're mine.

Copyright © JamesKistner ... [ 2010-08-17 10:31:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Living the Lie You're Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by Fern on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 10:57:32 AM AEST
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Seems you're brokenhearted. Great poem. Very emotional! You'll get over this love and move on...that's life. Keep writing, though...you are a voice that needs to be heard...and you are VERY VERY GOOD!!!!!!

Re: Living the Lie You're Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by kadie on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 12:29:44 PM AEST
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Great poem.
keep writing

Re: Living the Lie You're Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by Rasberry on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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I enjoy reading what you write,think bcoz what u write reminds me of some1 but mre so bcoz ur a gud writer,lucky 4 us,we were created to 4get hence time heals all wounds.

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