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Array ( [sid] => 161829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => are you real? [time] => 2010-08-16 13:01:16 [hometext] => so i dont love him but i love how he makes me feel :) [bodytext] => what if its all as dream?
ugh! dont even go there, im just wondering when you'll fade
disappear from my memory, to erase the messages
to lose it all, im hoping i wont.
im pulling it, pushing it, putting it out of my mind,
it hurts to think that way. i just wanna keep u near
its hard to keep the thoughts away
it takes a great amount of effort to keep them at bay
because nothing ever last forever

u make me smile through out the day with just one thought
you got me feeling happy but it makes me sad to think we cant be
it has me confused and thinking of ways it could work
but in the back of my mind i know it wont
it fun to think we can be together but then i remember..
damn wth am i thinking? then i bang my head against the nearest wall
to get the thoughts out of my mind

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are you real?

Contributed by tinybitinsane on Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 01:01:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

what if its all as dream?
ugh! dont even go there, im just wondering when you'll fade
disappear from my memory, to erase the messages
to lose it all, im hoping i wont.
im pulling it, pushing it, putting it out of my mind,
it hurts to think that way. i just wanna keep u near
its hard to keep the thoughts away
it takes a great amount of effort to keep them at bay
because nothing ever last forever

u make me smile through out the day with just one thought
you got me feeling happy but it makes me sad to think we cant be
it has me confused and thinking of ways it could work
but in the back of my mind i know it wont
it fun to think we can be together but then i remember..
damn wth am i thinking? then i bang my head against the nearest wall
to get the thoughts out of my mind

Copyright © tinybitinsane ... [ 2010-08-16 13:01:16]
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Re: are you real? (User Rating: 1 )
by scottstone on Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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cute but a little disturbing with the last few lines =S

Re: are you real? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jameskistner on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 10:22:49 AM AEST
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I have a person like this, its very hard to get the right words to express the way someone makes you feel. You done a good job.

Re: are you real? (User Rating: 1 )
by dancal04 on Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 02:49:50 AM AEST
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I also know this feeling very well!

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