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Array ( [sid] => 161809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another World Away [time] => 2010-08-15 02:29:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => so crumble into pieces
as we slip into a dream
forsake the same reality
it’s never as it seems

where the picture’s never faded
swaying trees and greener grass
the sands of time do not escape here
in the future’s present past

take my hand and come here
where tomorrow never waits
it plays into the moment
and it exes out the dates

where it all works out together
endless fields and skies untamed
while the scenery always changes
the love and laughter stays the same

in a place we visit often
where your thought’s are left concealed
yet it’s here you feel the safest
when reality’s less real

and it hurts for you to leave it
while you curse the rising sun
as you revel in the memories
of the things you’ve never done

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Another World Away

Contributed by scottstone on Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 02:29:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

so crumble into pieces
as we slip into a dream
forsake the same reality
it’s never as it seems

where the picture’s never faded
swaying trees and greener grass
the sands of time do not escape here
in the future’s present past

take my hand and come here
where tomorrow never waits
it plays into the moment
and it exes out the dates

where it all works out together
endless fields and skies untamed
while the scenery always changes
the love and laughter stays the same

in a place we visit often
where your thought’s are left concealed
yet it’s here you feel the safest
when reality’s less real

and it hurts for you to leave it
while you curse the rising sun
as you revel in the memories
of the things you’ve never done

scottstone, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.

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Re: Another World Away (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 03:08:15 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this. It is beautifuly writen and flows nicely. Well done.

Re: Another World Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniellemarie on Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 04:59:35 PM AEST
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very well written nice poem
-DanielleMarie-

Re: Another World Away (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 01:48:23 AM AEST
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I love your poetry : ) it is skillful, and has emotion behind it. I like the line about cursing the rising sun. A very clever poem to say you wish time would go by slower.

Re: Another World Away (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:45:36 PM AEST
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What can I say another well written write nice job.

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