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Array ( [sid] => 161804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Carousel Of Revenge [time] => 2010-08-14 12:32:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm bleeding
I'm needing
to reach out
to touch you,
I'm fading
I'm so cold
living in this world
where
everything is about you.

I'm seeing
visions
of you as you maim,
viscious
is the look
terror
is your game.

Clowns of confusion stumble
you laugh
as we fall down
feeding off our emotions
all the time
trying to hide that you feel hollow.

wait
something's changing
I see the real you
and
you are ugly,
your deception
controls no more
now your bleeding
and
it's beautiful.

Clowns of confusion
now ride
the carousel of revenge
laughing once again
as you drown in sorrow
so
if you think you're hurting now
better not
wake up tomorrow.
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Carousel Of Revenge

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 12:32:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm bleeding
I'm needing
to reach out
to touch you,
I'm fading
I'm so cold
living in this world
where
everything is about you.

I'm seeing
visions
of you as you maim,
viscious
is the look
terror
is your game.

Clowns of confusion stumble
you laugh
as we fall down
feeding off our emotions
all the time
trying to hide that you feel hollow.

wait
something's changing
I see the real you
and
you are ugly,
your deception
controls no more
now your bleeding
and
it's beautiful.

Clowns of confusion
now ride
the carousel of revenge
laughing once again
as you drown in sorrow
so
if you think you're hurting now
better not
wake up tomorrow.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2010-08-14 12:32:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Carousel Of Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniellemarie on Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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this is raw and deep...I like it
-Daniellemarie-

Re: Carousel Of Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Jameskistner on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 01:07:12 PM AEST
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I'd really like to dedicate this to my ex. Shes colder than dry ice. Great write!

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