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[sid] => 16179
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Can't you
[time] => 2003-04-17 22:25:00
[hometext] => I wrote this poem for my b/f Ashley when she was upset with me. I gave it to her so that she could better understand how I feel about our friendship. We'll I thought that I would share this poem with you, though it isn't my best I hope you all enjoy!
[bodytext] => Can't you see the hurt in my eyes
Can you not feel my pain Do you know that a tear drops Everytime I hear your name I was supposed to be the strong one I was supposed to be able to fight back those tears But the mere thought of losing my best friend can cause even the strongest to just crumble inside Can't you see the hurt in my eyes Can you not feel my pain Do you know that losing you is a fear, That I would never like to face My thoughts are all jumbled together and I don't know the right words to say The right words to make everything magically all better again All I can express is how I feel and it's like I am being ripped apart from the inside But can't you see the hurt in my eyes Can you not feel my pain Do you know that I hurt deep down, and that I only want to be reunited with my best friend Can't you see what this is doing to me Can you not feel my pain Don't you know how much I love you and That only you can take away this pain Jennifer Lynn Horner [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Gin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
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