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STRONG
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 12:51:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you're all alone
You watch the time tick by
Thinking of memories that make you cry
In this life
You must try
To be strong
Even though you give your best
You still have regret
About those promises you never kept
In this life
The goal you must set
Is to be strong
To be strong
To be strong
When you think you can't go on
Because you're not like everyone
Sometime in your world
You face adversity
From any troubles you try and break free
In this life
It seems to me
You must be strong
I know you've made mistakes
But mostly you've been right
Don't you give up without fight
In this life
You will find the light
In this life
It will be alright
In this life
You can't go wrong...
If you stay strong
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2010-08-12 00:51:01]
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Re: STRONG
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 10:46:07 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this. It has a certain something that jumps off the page and draws the reader in. Well writen. |
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Re: STRONG
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by HippyWitchGal on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 07:18:23 AM AEST
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| I love how this is structured and the absolute hope it inspires. Well done! |
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Re: STRONG
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by northernlights on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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| When you think you can't go on because you're not like everyone,familiar words and a tough way to live but a celebration of being an individual when you have the strength to be that way, inspiring write |
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