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Whisper of a Killer
Contributed by
mistersarang
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Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 09:10:35 PM in AEST
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She knew what to say,
I swear she read my mind.
Lies, I felt came out.
Stop, my heart indead did.
I want more than words.
Feelings hurt, nothing but the cold breeze
The sound of her sweet words are uncontrollable.
Stop, my heart indead did.
Emotions disppears, nothing left
but her whisper.
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2010-08-11 21:10:35]
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Re: Whisper of a Killer
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 06:17:43 AM AEST
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| good one.,.could ahve been a little more mysterious!! |
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Re: Whisper of a Killer
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by Daniellemarie on
Saturday, 14th August 2010 @ 12:32:23 PM AEST
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I like that this meaning is hidden and the reader percieves it how they wish.
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Re: Whisper of a Killer
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 06:30:17 PM AEST
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| Are you hinting that you murdered her? Is this an admission of guilt? I suggest you get yourself a good lawyer then go hand yourself in. |
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