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Array ( [sid] => 16174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Psycho Ex [time] => 2003-04-17 20:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => its so hard
so so hard
will I make it?
can I make it?
is it truly possible?
or am I delaying my death?
is it even worth clinging onto life?
should even I bother to continue trying?
just to get hurt again?
more deeply
so that I can find myself back in the same situtation again
falling in the pit of depression
with a ripped open heart
each time I notice the walls are getting smoother and smoother
soon enough the walls will be completely smooth
no ledges to save me from the fall
the fall into deep depression
the fall into complete insainity
when that ONE relationship comes
when that ONE day comes that my heart is ripped open again
I will take my life away ever so quickly and quietly
no one will know of the plan
people will just get in the way
delay me
try to "help" me
so I can be HURT again?
no...
NO MORE!
all the girls that hurt me will find out eventually
suffer the pain I have
knowing they took part in my death
cuz this isn't suicide
but murder
can they live with the guilt
endure the pain
or will they end it also
knowing they took part.....
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 36 [informant] => psychopunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Psycho Ex

Contributed by psychopunk on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



its so hard
so so hard
will I make it?
can I make it?
is it truly possible?
or am I delaying my death?
is it even worth clinging onto life?
should even I bother to continue trying?
just to get hurt again?
more deeply
so that I can find myself back in the same situtation again
falling in the pit of depression
with a ripped open heart
each time I notice the walls are getting smoother and smoother
soon enough the walls will be completely smooth
no ledges to save me from the fall
the fall into deep depression
the fall into complete insainity
when that ONE relationship comes
when that ONE day comes that my heart is ripped open again
I will take my life away ever so quickly and quietly
no one will know of the plan
people will just get in the way
delay me
try to "help" me
so I can be HURT again?
no...
NO MORE!
all the girls that hurt me will find out eventually
suffer the pain I have
knowing they took part in my death
cuz this isn't suicide
but murder
can they live with the guilt
endure the pain
or will they end it also
knowing they took part.....




Copyright © psychopunk ... [ 2003-04-17 20:45:00]
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Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 09:01:41 PM AEST
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this is good, holds passion, i like. YOU CAN DO IT!


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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Wow.. all that just because of a girl??
This is so nicely written though
Good stuff!


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:13:47 AM AEST
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nice one!
Amy


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:41:46 PM AEST
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Damn straight, I wrote a poem like this and I agree with you. Sure, i am a girl but aren't your ex so I am safe! lol! ok good poem!


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 02:22:16 PM AEST
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wow, amazing passion in this.


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 02:25:58 PM AEST
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it is hard, but arent there better reasons to live? what if the next time, she's the right one? if she's really meant to be with you she wont break your heart...

Lindsey


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 1 )
by DOCTERKRISITN on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 06:03:43 PM AEST
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that was really good i enjoyed reading it


Re: Psycho Ex (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 09:21:16 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was great. I have gone thru those feelings before... so i totally feel you. good job.
steb
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