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Father, where are you?

Contributed by HogOfTheForsaken on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:53:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Each godforesaken moment that we're apart
The dagger of loneliness pierces my stone cold heart.
The bitter taste of moral ineptitude cannot be rinsed out
I'm so full of emptyness, my lack of faith is devout.
So please take away all this pain
And all this suffering - there is nothing to gain.

Jesus come and strike me down!
In the devil's lake of fire I shall drown
All of my demons and angelic children too.
I will fight and die to avenge my spirit
Which you tried to take, and then you stole it.



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Re: Father, where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 07:35:01 AM AEST
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Oh, gosh! So dark and brilliant! I'm in love. ;D aha.




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