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Closing In

Contributed by guiltycircles on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



These creatures crawl and squirm
You think by now I’d learn
I don’t dare to move
Please don’t show concern.

I see them and I feel them
But I cannot touch them
Wrapped in wire coils
A victim to this mayhem.

As the minutes tick away
Here I am forced to stay
Surrounded by demonic insects
Closer and closer they play.

What will I do
How will I get through
When there is nowhere left
To hide or run to.




Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2010-08-09 21:11:38]
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Re: Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:22:22 PM AEST
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if you believe it. it must be true.



Re: Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by quadira on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:05:58 AM AEST
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I like this. very atmospheric.


Re: Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by Punkrocknemo on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:09:32 PM AEST
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Different but pretty good write.


Re: Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 03:36:51 AM AEST
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This is gooooood.




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