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Array ( [sid] => 161701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FLY AWAY [time] => 2010-08-09 00:40:32 [hometext] => Not saying what we feel can sometimes make us lose the ones we love. [bodytext] => So this is it
There's no turning back
We have run out of time
Your plane leaves soon
And when it does, I will sit there
With these thoughts of mine

What if I had told you how I felt?
That if you leave my heart would start to melt
Would it be enough to keep you here today?
Or would I have to stand and watch you fly away?

The years have passed
With all the time we shared
I thought we had it all
I took for granted
Everything we seemed to have
I was such a fool

What if I told you how much you meant to me?
If I cried would you begin to see?
I don't know if there is anything else I can say
I don't want to stand and watch you fly away

As you walk from me you start to cry
You turn around to wave your last goodbye
You will still have my heart forever, come what may
As I just stand and watch you fly away [comments] => 4 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 22 [informant] => chrisdavid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

FLY AWAY

Contributed by chrisdavid on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 12:40:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

So this is it
There's no turning back
We have run out of time
Your plane leaves soon
And when it does, I will sit there
With these thoughts of mine

What if I had told you how I felt?
That if you leave my heart would start to melt
Would it be enough to keep you here today?
Or would I have to stand and watch you fly away?

The years have passed
With all the time we shared
I thought we had it all
I took for granted
Everything we seemed to have
I was such a fool

What if I told you how much you meant to me?
If I cried would you begin to see?
I don't know if there is anything else I can say
I don't want to stand and watch you fly away

As you walk from me you start to cry
You turn around to wave your last goodbye
You will still have my heart forever, come what may
As I just stand and watch you fly away

Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-08-09 00:40:32]
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Re: FLY AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by funmi on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 03:54:42 AM AEST
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wow this poem is so amazing... i was almost in tears.. because it made me think of losing myloved ones :( ... this is a moving poem..keep on writing

Re: FLY AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 06:09:01 AM AEST
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A very raw, emotional poem. Good work.

-Phil

Re: FLY AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 07:35:14 AM AEST
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i can see you clearly regret not saying these things, lovely stuff !

Re: FLY AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:04:37 PM AEST
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wow. "vision" ary ...

::rubs off::

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