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Array ( [sid] => 16170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => More Than I Can Take [time] => 2003-04-17 19:25:00 [hometext] => For Dean. He better come home this weekend, or I'm gonna just go crazy!! [bodytext] => Baby, I miss you, so come home today
I wanna hear you say the things you say
I'm gonna hold you and never let you go
You know I hated seeing you go
Don't leave me again, never one more goodbye
You're every dream I've ever dreampt
And every wish I've ever made
And tonight I'll pray that you come home real soon

Baby, you're the one, mine without a doubt
I'm starting to think I couldn't love you more
You've got me craving all the stupid things you do
Knowing I could be yelling at you
Every second without you is a second wasted
Tried to make you see I can't take it
Can't sleep, can't wake up, can't hide it
If you'd just call, then I could get through this night

Baby, I'm really losing my mind now
I'm feeling so faithless yet I'm full of hope
You were my motivation each and every day
And now I don't even wanna try
When you're so far away, my whole world crumbles
I promise to be everything
That made you fall in love with me
One day without you is more than I can take

When the minutes and the hours just drag on by
Kinda makes me wish I could curl up and die
Not certain of when I'll see you again
I'll just sleep till I can wake up to your face
Will you come home now if I promise to be
Everything you thought I would be
I would've sworn it's breaking down
But somehow you just keep on loving me more [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
More Than I Can Take

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Baby, I miss you, so come home today
I wanna hear you say the things you say
I'm gonna hold you and never let you go
You know I hated seeing you go
Don't leave me again, never one more goodbye
You're every dream I've ever dreampt
And every wish I've ever made
And tonight I'll pray that you come home real soon

Baby, you're the one, mine without a doubt
I'm starting to think I couldn't love you more
You've got me craving all the stupid things you do
Knowing I could be yelling at you
Every second without you is a second wasted
Tried to make you see I can't take it
Can't sleep, can't wake up, can't hide it
If you'd just call, then I could get through this night

Baby, I'm really losing my mind now
I'm feeling so faithless yet I'm full of hope
You were my motivation each and every day
And now I don't even wanna try
When you're so far away, my whole world crumbles
I promise to be everything
That made you fall in love with me
One day without you is more than I can take

When the minutes and the hours just drag on by
Kinda makes me wish I could curl up and die
Not certain of when I'll see you again
I'll just sleep till I can wake up to your face
Will you come home now if I promise to be
Everything you thought I would be
I would've sworn it's breaking down
But somehow you just keep on loving me more




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-04-17 19:25:00]
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Re: More Than I Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
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beautiful write full of love.Hope he makes it home tonight.
Michelle


Re: More Than I Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:40:37 PM AEST
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sweet and so full of longing... love makes ya ache, ack, hope he's home soon:)
hugs n' love always nessa


Re: More Than I Can Take (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:38:23 PM AEST
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This is gorgeous Moonlit.... :)
Just beautiful




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