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[aid] => mick
[title] => Reality?
[time] => 2010-08-08 12:33:05
[hometext] => a dream
[bodytext] => Twas in some fevered dream long barren night ago i sat and pondered on this dream through a year or so for in this dream i dreampt i was awake and as i awoke i found myself asleep and in some twisted corridor a wiseman as myself did creep bending creaking sneaking leaking into the night and sinking to oblivion below and on a snow laced mountain top stained in blood a blizzard did howl i found an aged relic scorned and scowled and now my angel stood before me frozen faced in awe bound by love and an aeon of folklore this mystic beauty approached me and brought silence to my soul a sullen abyss above me and a heaven lingered down a silver glass ballroom with an angel at its top and a fogged and golden hell with a demon at its stead a chapel for the hated a sanctuary for the lost a torment for the righteous and a prison at a cost a church for the damned and a hell for the good a burden for the wicked a rain that burns a purified crucifix an alter for the sacrifice the last and counting price a sickening perfumed bitter air in this heaven for the evil no good man stood an an angel in my nightmare a lover in my bed speechless heartbroken tears i did cry ruby crimson droplets softly singing goodbye i awake in this limbo to find myself dead and that lover in another bed and now i am awake again breathing a stagnant air i wish to dream the same as i did a lifetime ago fortunesdancer, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not include commenting on your own work. Your comments on your own work have been removed. If you want to respond to someone, please send them a private message. As of this note, you have 55 poems posted and only 13 interactive comments. At the very least please bring your comment count up to 56 BEFORE posting another poem. No other post will be accepted from you until you do so. Thank you. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 49 [informant] => fortunesdancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
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