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It's waiting for you and I.
Wait for your time.
The time when we die.
But do not worry.
It's death.

It's just something that we all go through.
It's not the end, it's a new start.
Even though we may leave this world behind,
It's the start of something much greater.

Death is but a mode of transportation.
We arrive in one of two destinations...
See you there.

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Embrace Death When it Comes.

Contributed by The_Writing_Master on Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You know it's coming.
It's waiting for you and I.
Wait for your time.
The time when we die.
But do not worry.
It's death.

It's just something that we all go through.
It's not the end, it's a new start.
Even though we may leave this world behind,
It's the start of something much greater.

Death is but a mode of transportation.
We arrive in one of two destinations...
See you there.

Copyright © The_Writing_Master ... [ 2010-08-04 22:48:51]
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Re: Embrace Death When it Comes. (User Rating: 1 )
by theunknown on Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:15:34 PM AEST
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this is really good ive written a few dark poems but not recently

Re: Embrace Death When it Comes. (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 04:21:49 AM AEST
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Very good work...afterall, Death grins at all of us...
My critique would pertain to structure...a little more would be better in my eye...
Other than that,,,very good...
Take Care,
Steve

Re: Embrace Death When it Comes. (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 07:56:57 AM AEST
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I love how you ended this. I never thought of death as "a mode of transportation." Very clever.

-Kara

Re: Embrace Death When it Comes. (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 08:50:26 PM AEST
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masterful. death comes to us all. wow!

Re: Embrace Death When it Comes. (User Rating: 1 )
by andrewjones12 on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 11:13:22 AM AEST
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dark as dawns new light, when you die, you win the fight.

i found alot of blatant meaning in this write, i enjoyed your words very much.
blessings,
andrew.

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