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Array ( [sid] => 161561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confusion [time] => 2010-08-02 14:43:07 [hometext] => Appologies for the spelling. Let me know what you think please. [bodytext] => Filled with wrong I woefully lie and survey the bleakness of my inner eye,
Naught but paranoya, confusion and Sin; a cocktail of misinturpretation and hurt.
This is that which lies within.
Pleasure becomes empty, relationships faulter, chasing and chasing, high after high,
Doubting of self, lonelyness, guilt.
Unfathomable vessel of complex desire, faltering, fluctuating, with every wind and tide,
Little if any consistency within resides.
How does a man weigh good against bad, who's direction is soverien, what is man without self?
Beneith endless facads of generosity and good will, beneith it all lies a yurning for help, infinate is the chasm, the black whole within,
Woe to those who satisfy this with Sin.


bolts, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

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[comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Bolts [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Confusion

Contributed by Bolts on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 02:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Filled with wrong I woefully lie and survey the bleakness of my inner eye,
Naught but paranoya, confusion and Sin; a cocktail of misinturpretation and hurt.
This is that which lies within.
Pleasure becomes empty, relationships faulter, chasing and chasing, high after high,
Doubting of self, lonelyness, guilt.
Unfathomable vessel of complex desire, faltering, fluctuating, with every wind and tide,
Little if any consistency within resides.
How does a man weigh good against bad, who's direction is soverien, what is man without self?
Beneith endless facads of generosity and good will, beneith it all lies a yurning for help, infinate is the chasm, the black whole within,
Woe to those who satisfy this with Sin.


bolts, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




Copyright © Bolts ... [ 2010-08-02 14:43:07]
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Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:20:07 PM AEST
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Strong interesting write great start your sensitivity conveys a depth of feeling and your thinking prompts questioning well written just need a spell checker


Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by wood on Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:00:32 PM AEST
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amazing expression




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