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[aid] => mick
[title] => Sadistic Love
[time] => 2010-08-01 18:34:17
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[bodytext] => Freezing cold where is the heat Shivers run down to my feet Lightning strikes it starts to rain All too fast it clogs the drain Water rushes down the block Life is ticking like a clock All is being swept away Taken is my white boquet Standing in my sodden gown I slowly start to gaze down The water now is at my knees My blood filled veins begin to freeze I see his ring shine in the light I scream for help through the dark night The water hits against my chin Why won't he help, I cannot win I try my best to stay afloat I start to cough it's in my throat I gasp and cry for help once more My lungs sting like an open sore Again he stares and shakes his head It's over now, I'm left for dead It's much too strong, I'm far below He takes his ring and starts to throw It hits the ground beneath my toes The water fills my lifeless nose He grasps the knife once in my heart He stares and grins as I depart xnickix7, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This is your 12th submission and will be your last unless you bring your comment to poem ratio to at least 1:1 BEFORE posting another poem. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xnickix7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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