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Array ( [sid] => 161526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Examine [time] => 2010-07-31 19:38:02 [hometext] => if i told you what i t was about then there would be no point putting it into poetry. obviously no one can understand it and even you can see if you just step back from where you are sitting and decide to look around for a change and DO something [bodytext] => I’m not trapped
But I am confused
I don’t feel poor
But I observe cruelty
I carry no bruises
Or scars on my face
Breaking down walls
Then I witness all hate

Whistling clouds floating by
Turn to gusts of wind in the evening sky
The splintering cold brushes against my face
Fallen, frightened, furious fears are now your pain
Can it be that I only notice
That nobody else knows where they’re heading

Hate is repulsive
Hate is irritating
Two choices, good or bad
In the whole world that is left unsaid…
Brothers, sisters, moms, and dads
Our acting upon the evil in their mentality and spirit
And you ask why the world is distant

Does ANYBODY recognize what is going on
It cannot come close to complication
Stressing, pushing, urging
Consider long and hard
Billions of people pack this world
Just a dozen fill ones heart

Pain is a cringe in ones heart and soul
Pain is like blacken dark coal
And no one seems to care that people vanish
And no one seems to care that people are hurt
Suffering, miserable, and aching
It will survive within you and it won’t ever go away




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Examine

Contributed by gigglybubblers13 on Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 07:38:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I’m not trapped
But I am confused
I don’t feel poor
But I observe cruelty
I carry no bruises
Or scars on my face
Breaking down walls
Then I witness all hate

Whistling clouds floating by
Turn to gusts of wind in the evening sky
The splintering cold brushes against my face
Fallen, frightened, furious fears are now your pain
Can it be that I only notice
That nobody else knows where they’re heading

Hate is repulsive
Hate is irritating
Two choices, good or bad
In the whole world that is left unsaid…
Brothers, sisters, moms, and dads
Our acting upon the evil in their mentality and spirit
And you ask why the world is distant

Does ANYBODY recognize what is going on
It cannot come close to complication
Stressing, pushing, urging
Consider long and hard
Billions of people pack this world
Just a dozen fill ones heart

Pain is a cringe in ones heart and soul
Pain is like blacken dark coal
And no one seems to care that people vanish
And no one seems to care that people are hurt
Suffering, miserable, and aching
It will survive within you and it won’t ever go away




gigglybubblers13, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Examine (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 10:05:45 PM AEST
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nice




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