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Statues in the shade of eastern beginnings

Now sets in westerns yearning for rest.

Dreams of that day will inevitably replay moments of that unforgettable day.

When we help hands on that slippery rock

While the creek washed our souls from bottom to top.

Basking in its clouded reflection,
With time far from allowed.
And our love shouting loud.

“I love you”
“I love you”

*pinch poke, you owe me a coke*
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effervescent veil.

Contributed by andrewjones12 on Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 07:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The smile of piercing ears is upon your effervescent veil.

Statues in the shade of eastern beginnings

Now sets in westerns yearning for rest.

Dreams of that day will inevitably replay moments of that unforgettable day.

When we help hands on that slippery rock

While the creek washed our souls from bottom to top.

Basking in its clouded reflection,
With time far from allowed.
And our love shouting loud.

“I love you”
“I love you”

*pinch poke, you owe me a coke*

Copyright Â© andrewjones12 ... [ 2010-07-27 07:51:42]
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Re: effervescent veil. (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 12:59:09 AM AEST
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Once again a lovely piece of writing. You express yourself so well with well chosen words, well done Andrew, more please.

Re: effervescent veil. (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 09:34:28 AM AEST
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ENCORE! ENCORE! ENCORE! The difference between white and black.........what a wonderful contrast is that! Pronounced which makes it really stick out! Like a lovely Opera.
Tantilizing, mezmerizing, to the depths, and then the last minute is brought back to tease, and please!
What creativity!
Warm love
consue

Re: effervescent veil. (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Writing_Master on Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 02:52:17 PM AEST
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beautiful my friend! Just as always! You chose your words so carefully, and that stuck out to me. Best of luck to you my friend.
-Matthew

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