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Running through our toes,

Looking as if they weep.

To where the tide stands,
Travel with me.

Venturing will be short with caps so gray and strong.

Watch your step love,

Grumpy gravel also flows along.
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picture this.

Contributed by andrewjones12 on Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 07:23:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Wet water slipping under our feet.

Running through our toes,

Looking as if they weep.

To where the tide stands,
Travel with me.

Venturing will be short with caps so gray and strong.

Watch your step love,

Grumpy gravel also flows along.

Copyright © andrewjones12 ... [ 2010-07-27 07:23:47]
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Re: picture this. (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 09:04:53 PM AEST
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Your poem has powerful imagery. I could visualize this piece well. I could see a couple in love wading through the ocean as the tide comes in and walking hand in hand. Very inspiring piece.

Heidi

Re: picture this. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mila on Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 11:55:14 PM AEST
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so touching the image can be captured by this piece!

Re: picture this. (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 01:02:29 AM AEST
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this is lovely. I can smell the ocean and your words take me to where the tide is turning and the waves are humming. Thanks so much for sharing this.

Re: picture this. (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 08:50:45 AM AEST
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A poet that paints lovely pictures in other's minds. This was so refreshing, Andrew. Do more of these please. Few words, but paints with water colors at times.! It all flows so nicely together, and I lovet reading it in 90 degs weather!
Finely done, Loved this line at the end.
Watch your step love.........I can read so much into just one line Andrew.......and I know you meant for me to do just that too!
Warm love
consue

Re: picture this. (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Writing_Master on Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 02:55:32 PM AEST
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Your sense of imagery is amazing, stunning piece of work there. keep it up!
-Matthew

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